Warriorcatclansrp Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page/Declined 8

Lunarstorm (W) ~ Declined
-☀Sunstream ✼   Aidan is cracked Lapis☀ 00:52, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. Maybe look at approved images for a light source reference? 01:33 Thu Jun 4

Re~Upped -☀Sunstream ✼   Aidan is cracked Lapis☀ 23:24, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the haunch shading 19:06, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:30, 07/22/2015

Declined due to lack of work. 01:20, 08/23/2015

Alderkit (AC) (K) ~ Declined
She looks like a piece of pizza.

Define the shading on the face/hind leg. H y a l i t e ☆

still working? 13:30, 07/22/2015

Declined due to lack of work. 01:20, 08/23/2015

Rose (KP) ~ Declined
Eh.

Her paw pad needs colored in :) otherwise this is gorgeous. ❤️‍ ‍   Hearts    not    parts   ❤️‍  01:33, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading 11:29, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a little green, maybe tweak the base color? Also, define the eye depth. 14:58 Mon Jun 15

Re~Upped Thank you, Raven :) -S u n s t r e a m  ☾ Stronger than you   22:54, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure there's some waste around the head. Also, should there be shading over the eyes like that? I'm not talking about eye depth, I'm asking if there's shading over the eyes. 23:07 Tue Jun 16

there's waste all over. 17:03, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna Re-Do this. 15:57, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

still working? 13:30, 07/22/2015

Declined due to lack of work. 01:20, 08/23/2015

Pantherheart (Q) ~ Declined
Just...because. -S u n s t r e a m ☾ Stronger than you   00:20, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

There's an awkward spot of light on the back, and an awkward darker circle on her knee closest to us. :) 💀  embrace mortality💀  02:58, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped -S u n s t r e a m ☾ I think my favorite round thing was in there!   22:37, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

The problem I mentioned still isn't fixed- I can provide a redline if needed. i've got more  wit    20:33, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is leaking on the legs 17:09 Tue Jun 30

still working? 13:30, 07/22/2015

Declined due to lack of work. 01:20, 08/23/2015

Carppaw (App) ~ Declined
Requested. -S u n s t r e a m ☾ I think my favorite round thing was in there!   20:30, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

You should define your shading and choose a clear light source. I can't really tell where the light is coming from. H y a l i t e ☆ 22:50, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the spots 19:14, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

the spots are over-smudged imho 💀 embrace mortality💀  23:34, July 6, 2015 (UTC)

they're smudged fine, just unevenly. some spots (mainly the black ones) aren't smudged quite as much as others. 17:19 Sun Jul 12

Still working? 19:17, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 01:20, 08/23/2015

Yui (K) ~ Declined
New Smudged shading. -S u n s t r e a m ☾ I think my favorite round thing was in there!   23:18, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading depth 17:08 Tue Jun 30

still working? 13:30, 07/22/2015

Declined due to lack of work. <span style="">01:20, 08/23/2015

Wendy (K) ~ Declined
Can I even post this? 14:34, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

You have to be in the project to post images. Other than that, define the eye depth and make the pupils more visible. (Eye depth is the gradient of light to dark color in the charart's eye, just so you know.) <span style="">16:41 Tue Jun 23

re-ups Hm? 15:00, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading, and blur it on the back/haunch <span style="">22:36 Wed Jul 1

still working? <span style="">13:30, 07/22/2015

Declined due to lack of work. <span style="">01:20, 08/23/2015