Talk:SummerClan/@comment-4019383-20111212224041

I got an idea! From my video game xD. So how about some cats who work for twolegs want Poppyheart's kits. Grayfoot refuses, and Poppyheart offers her life instead. Devastated, Grayfoot holds his kits. Poppyheart tells him not to look so sad, that they would meet again in the after life. The cats take Poppyheart back to the twoleg lair, and they freeze her in a giant crystal for her power. Moons later, the cats return, as they want the kits because Poppyheart's power is draining out. Grayfoot refuses, and is killed in a battle with the cats. The five use their power, yowling in devastation. The cats vanish, and all except Seedkit get the after affect-- their eyes turn yellow and they can't talk. Seedkit helps them, and then buries Grayfoot by himself. He starts training endlessly for moons and moons and moons. He grows to apprentice size and earns his apprentice name along with his siblings, who are now awake. They journey out into the forest for one season, and reach a twoleg lair. The cats are guarding it, and then the five apprentices defeat them. They go inside to find more cats and twolegs looking over a crystal, which is the crystal that Poppyheart was frozen in. So they defeat the twolegs, who send out their dogs, but the apprentices defeat the dogs with tooth and claw. (None die) They all use their elemental power and defeat the twolegs except for one, who Seedpaw slashes with his claws in the face, and then time goes back to when they were kits again after Poppyheart died. Grayfoot is actually the leader cat, and transports time again and again, being a fake cat. The apprentices get transported to real time, and defeat the leader cat. Breezepaw stops time, and then makes a whole new world: where they never died, where Rainface, Silverflower, Luckshine, and the rest never died, so they didn't become reincarnations, but Rainpaw, Silverpaw, and Shinepaw still are real. They all live happily ever after.

The end!

Hehehe, commenties?