Warriorcatclansrp Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page/Declined 7

Fogface (W) ~ Declined
When was the last time Beens put up a charart? Anyways, have a redone version of the warrior image of everyone's favorite Beebs's favorite dork. 23:51, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

(Yes, he is an awesome cat. x3) He looks great, blurr the shading, it looks very blotchy. (Though it gives him an interesting texture) 18:21, April 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, since it doesn't look blotchy to me (it's smudged, btw), but if someone agrees, then I will go smudge it some more. 20:20, April 18, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? 00:47, May 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading's super blotchy. When smudging, never use a brush larger than 1 px in width. 02:52, May 15, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 19:45, May 15, 2014 (UTC)

It looks a little too fuzzy now. Are you using giant strokes when smudging and just going wild? Use controlled strokes to make it even throughout. 02:31, May 21, 2014 (UTC)

Nope, I'm not using giant strokes, and I think the shading is fine, since it's artist choice. 19:05, May 21, 2014 (UTC)

Same as what I put on Hailclaw's. — 20:10 Wed Jun 18

re-up 20:51, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Same as Hailclaw's. 21:34, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 22:02, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten and feather out the tail shading. 03:42, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 13:31, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the tail shading even more, as it's very sharp. 21:19, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 19:08, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

The shading shill looks a bit blotchy to me, possibly smudge it a bit? 21:58 Sat Sep 6

Still working? 23:38 Mon Sep 29

Declined due to lack of work. 02:35 Sat Nov 1

Risingspirit (W) ~ Declined
Shading's a poophead. Comments? 16:37, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Curve the texture/smudges in the shading to go with the flow of the fur more, and sharpen the shading a bit. 04:16, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ 00:56, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and remove it from the top part of his head (it doesn't look right ouo). Also, smudge/blur the stripes on the forepaw closest to us. Oh, and I think there's a little waste on the shoulder. 20:04, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 23:38 Mon Sep 29

Declined due to lack of work. 02:35 Sat Nov 1

Snowpelt (WC) (W) ~ Declined
Prepare for like five more images. 14:50, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

This is lovely :3 Blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder a bit. 16:39, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 23:38 Mon Sep 29

Declined due to lack of work. 02:35 Sat Nov 1

Ivybreeze (W) ~ Declined
14:50, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

The shading's looking a bit blotchy, blur/smudge it? 21:58 Sat Sep 6

Still working? 23:38 Mon Sep 29

Declined due to lack of work. 02:35 Sat Nov 1

Ivytail (W) - Withdrawn
comments? — 00:42 Sat Aug 16

Dannnng she's pretty, define her haunch shading. 17:07, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 21:58 Sat Sep 6

'reups yea — Sun Sep 7 21:36

withdrawing as i've lost the files :c — Mon Dec 22 23:50

Drew (W) - Withdrawn
eh. 19:45, 10/28/2014

Define the stripes some?? hella 00:37, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

They're supposed to be pale/faint, you nerd. Besides, I can see 'em fine  <span style="">00:45, 11/7/2014

Add some depth to the chest/neck shading, and define/add more facial shading. 03:12, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

wothdrawing for now since idk what we're doing w the approval page and i need to redo this to match her new image so <span style="">23:36, 12/20/2014

Mintflower (W) - Withdrawn
its been a while since i did a good one of these. — <span style="">Thu Oct 30 08:43

aaaiieee look at my baby's beautiful mate<33 He shoulder area looks quite flat, maybe define/add shading? Just a litttle bit? <span style="">16:43, 10/30/2014

reups how's this? thank you bro c: — <span style="">Thu Oct 30 19:37

Perhaps add a little shading along the front of her shoulder, to continue down to the front of her leg? 03:09, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

withdrawing as i've lost the files :c — <span style="">Mon Dec 22 23:50

Brokenkit (SplC) (K) - Withdrawn
i am in love with this cutie. — <span style="">Thu Oct 30 08:43

Soften the edges of the shading on the white a little bit on both images. 03:09, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

withdrawing as i've lost the files :c — <span style="">Mon Dec 22 23:51

Brokenkit (SplC) (Alt. K) - Withdrawn
same as the kit above, just her crooked jaw. — <span style="">Thu Oct 30 08:43

withdrawing as i've lost the files :c — <span style="">Mon Dec 22 23:51

Shadowclaw (W) - Withdrawn
back and ready for action <span style="">07:21, 10/26/2014

reup messed with his head <span style="">09:28, 10/26/2014

Is he dark gray or black? Lighten the base and texture of gray, but keep it the same if black. He looks a little shiny, so sharpen/roughen up the edges of his shading, as well. 03:17, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna withdraw for now <span style="">23:20, 01/30/2015

Slugstorm (W) - Withdrawn
guess who reused texture and shading bc they're lazy <span style="">13:49, 10/26/2014

reup tfw u forget noses are a thing cats have <span style="">13:52, 10/26/2014

Define the shading. 03:16, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

withdrawing for now <span style="">23:22, 01/30/2015

Goldenmoon (SuC) (W) - Withdrawn
last one until these are approved lmao <span style="">03:06, 10/30/2014

This seems really shiny? Perhaps tone down highlights and sharpen the edges of the shading a little more, so it doesn't look as rounded. 03:11, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make her a tortie with green eyes. ouo 23:39, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

withdrawn for now <span style="">23:22, 01/30/2015

Jadepool (W) - Declined
Woo~ Different blanks are fun ^^ I hope I did the heading right since I'm a kit here so idk if it should be evaluation or whateves. 17:55, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the body some and add some depth. Define the facial shading too. Very nice! <span style="">20:35, 11/12/2014

Reuploaded :3 23:34, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

This is nice, there's waste all along the image, especially around the back end. <span style="">23:43 Wed Nov 12

Reuploaded Thanks ^^ 00:41, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is very hard-edged and the transition from light to dark isn't very smooth. Blur it out a little more, and possibly extend some highlights all the way to the edges of the lineart, so you can really blur a lot, without causing the circles to get smaller. 03:05, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ehh sorry for not uploading sooner. Been busy with school, life, ect. 14:38, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

still working? 00:24, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 10:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Crimsonwing (W) - Declined
Ugh.. haven't made a charart in forever >.> -- Serenity ~ Anchors Aweigh! ~ 14:42, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define his shading, it doesn look right...Where's your light source? Also, add eye-depth. 20:24, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! x.x -- Serenity ~ Anchors Aweigh! ~ 23:21, November 3, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the tail, haunch, and midsection. The chest is fine. Also, define the shading on the face a bit? This is wonderful! <span style="">23:24, 11/3/2014

Re-uploaded. :3 -- Serenity ~ Anchors Aweigh! ~ 15:58, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Are the changes showing? <span style="">02:12, 11/5/2014

I don't think they're showing. Also, maybe define the depth in the eyes? <span style="">00:53, 11/7/2014

Blur the shading a little bit more. 03:08, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 15:57, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 10:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Beautifulface (MC) ~ Declined
-cringe- First charart in ages. Comments? 19:15, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

I added texture...changes aren't showing. 16:44, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Curve the texture more to match the fur flow and the body's contours, and make sure it's equal darkness on all of the darkest areas, as the face looks much darker than the chest. (I think it may just look that way because the faces' shading is thicker) 04:17, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Decided I liked it better without the texture. 00:40, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Declined due to user leaving. 12:31, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Bumblefern (Ki) - Declined
So is this good didnt do the stripes this is just a pale gray tho...Patch

Its my first one so yeah..Patch

Remove the white background, fill in the missing white pixels, add shading, and give the eyes depth and pupils. If this is going to be just grey you need to change her description to pale grey. <span style="">20:33, 11/12/2014

You asked me if I could do this for you on my talk, so if you still want me to, I'd be more than happy to do it. Keep in mind that if you accept, while this'll be your character, it'll be my charart; in other words, I'd take this over for you. I don't mind whether you want to or not. 23:50, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I'm still learning to use this so sorry if it ain't right. i'll try to fix it. Patch (talk) 19:37, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 10:55, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Decline due to lack of work. 16:23, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sedgecloud (K) - Withdrawn
-unsatisfied horse noises- 10:06, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:50, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing because re-doing later. 18:34, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Healer Blank - Declined
23:17, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

This is declined due to the fact that this is stolen art and not made by you but by a Wildfirefromshadowclan. I will be deleting this, and for future refrence if you are making a blank make it yourself or get the permission. <span style="">23:29 Tue Feb 10

Is there a healer blank? 23:32, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks ~ Declined
I hate anatomy 16:08, September 21, 2014 (UTC)

These look a bit..anime, almost. Could you perhaps aim for a more realistic build/proportion set? 20:31, September 21, 2014 (UTC)

I did aim for a realistic set of build and proportion, I even copied from a photo of a real cat in the same pose. Could I please have a more specific explanation of what I could do to fix it? 12:32, September 22, 2014 (UTC)

I think Leggy means the big blocky paws need to be reduced in size and the eyes need to look more realistic. The eyes rn are really cartoonish. Aim for what you did with the blanks on WW; you did great on those. These should be realistic as those are. you can do it friend!!! <span style="">07:25, 10/26/2014

still working??? 00:33, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

looks as though these are being declined seeing as we have different ones up? <span style="">22:20, 02/11/2015

Spiderkit (Ki) ~ Declined
So how is it? 17:22, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

Crop the space around it so it's not so big, and get rid of the waste. 17:41, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

well i'm just getting this approved my friend made it. Her name is Sunstream

THis is the wrong blank. Please use the ones on the front page of the project. <span style="">17:44, 02/2/2015

I was pretty sure this is the right blank...but if you'll give me the link i'll have Sunny do it again. 17:46, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

This is the former version. Use the updated one, and I'm pretty sure that if Sun made it, they should be posting, not you. 17:47, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

What's teh link? 17:48, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

All the blanks are posted on the Project's main page. — <span style="">Mon Feb 2 19:32

woah hey this wasnt even your to post in the first place this should probably be declined bc?? its not your work <span style="">23:36, 02/9/2015

seeing as this wasn't even yours to post I'm gonna decline this. <span style="">23:17, 02/11/2015

Harepaw (W) - Declined
I believe I can put this up? — <span style="">Thu Feb 12 20:36

reups now i'll tinker the kit to match this — <span style="">Thu Feb 12 21:46

ayye this is beautiful but I'm sorry alex, you have to wait until the cat has reached the position so I unfortunately have to decline this, i'm sorry ;; (this was stoem. nerd forgot to sign)

Archiving. <span style="">22:35, 02/12/2015

Lightningpaw (W) - Declined
so I offered to make Beebs a thing and she loved it and said I could post it so have a Lightningpaw as a warrior.

I think this may have to wait until he actually reaches that rank? not sure so i'll talk to leggy, but in the meantime, thicken the shading on the tail and haunch,and perhaps add some shading along the neck <span style="">22:45, 02/11/2015

ye i have to decline this until he reaches that rank ;-; <span style="">22:22, 02/12/2015

Archiving. <span style="">22:35, 02/12/2015