Warriorcatclansrp Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page/Archive 16

Shellshore (W) - Redone
O p a l. . . ♥ 01:36, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours m8 22:00, 02/11/2015

Beautifulface (Mc) - Redone?
is this ok? — Mon Feb 9 08:15

blur the shading a lil bit?? That  Raven-Obsessed   Person  01:20, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

reups wasn't happy with it b4 — Wed Feb 11 05:36

Blur the shading tons on the haunch. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe it's fine, as I don't blur my shading at all, and it's how I've done my other chararts here. — Wed Feb 11 07:15

My bad, I meant to say smooth it out more. Right now it seems a bit rough and hard edged. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:20, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

reups done as much as the tool would allow — Wed Feb 11 07:25

Mitchell (W) - Redone
redone for the bae — Mon Feb 9 08:15

smudge the shading a bit, this is beauts. 02:52 Wed Feb 11

reups thank c: — Wed Feb 11 05:35

Dunnockfoot (W) - Redone
idk Beebs said that I could so here we go.

Define the ear pink. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:04, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Many of the images here don't have highly visible ear pink, actually. I'm also pretty sure it's not totally visible on cats in general, so I didn't tweak it too much. Also tweaked the base a bit.

Cispus (ki) ~ Redone
16:18, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the front left paw a little darker? O p a l. . . ♥ 01:35, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

They're all the same shade - it's due to the shading ;; 01:56, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Fogface (W) ~ Redone
he's legit a redo so putting him back up again 13:57, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs maybe? O p a l. . . ♥

re-up 15:42, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading.

re-up 00:32, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Jaystorm (Ki) - Redone
I forgot to post this a few days ago but I'll just put it up now. <span style="">23:21 Tue Feb 10

I'd define the shading a little more. Also, maybe change the shading color to a more of a brownish-color? It looks a little too grey (shading with dull colors actually sucks the original color from the image). O p a l. . . ♥ 03:55, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Crowwhisker (W) ~ Redone
yep 23:25, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading, and the light on the paws. Also, since she's supposed to be black, I suggest darkening her a little bit. I mean hell, look at Shepard and some of Alex's images, it's totally possible to go darker and it looks so neat.

Applefur (mc) ~ redone
20:08, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 15:42, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a little more and I think this is set sexy ass cat   01:28, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-up bless 8DD 02:01, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours m8 <span style="">20:24, 02/12/2015

Meagan (Q) - CBA
nice <span style="">18:24, 02/8/2015

CBA? 20:57, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 21:04, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Elmstar (K) - CBA
Comments? 20:06, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? i rlly like this <3 <span style="">22:17, 02/11/2015

Approved. 22:25, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Dipperkit (Ki) ~ CBA
three of the four kits up and tons of impossibilities just within this one kit, but im not concerned about that this time, at least just for dipperkit. <span style="">04:44 Sun Oct 19

Where's your light source? 03:19, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

same as bramblekit's i think. <span style="">00:59 Sat Jan 31

Define the facial shading a tiny bit more. 01:44, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">20:53 Sun Feb 1

Lighten up the shading on ==> side of the face. I can't see the ear pink. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:16, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine- I can see the ear pink quite well, actually.

Whoops my computer was showing something completely different ;.; ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:53, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna slap a CBA on this bab <span style="">22:55, 02/11/2015

Approved <span style="">22:32, 02/12/2015

Harepaw (Ki) - Tweaked?
— <span style="">Fri Feb 13 00:06

24 hours <span style="">22:57, 02/14/2015

Beautifulface (Ki) - redone
ye — <span style="">Fri Feb 13 23:17

24 hours m8 <span style="">23:15, 02/14/2015

Weaselwhisker (W) ~ CBA
look me posting a nerd on this page

hm... define shading? also maybe add depth to the ear closest to us <span style="">08:16, 10/26/2014

Reuploading the mega nerd 22:38, October 27, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Blur the shading a bit. 20:25, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:37, November 2, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Feather out the shading more: it looks really jagged. Cross lines and be sure to smoothly darken one shade of shading to the next. 03:20, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups 20:32, November 16, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Lighten the shading a tiny bit. 01:46, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 22:55, February 1, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the stripes some? they're kind of fading in 23:40, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:28, February 9, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the light on his right leg, and smooth out the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:47, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:59, February 9, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

add a tiny bit of depth to the closest front leg and the hind paws and i think this'll be ready for cba <span style="">22:23, 02/11/2015

Re-ups 00:31, February 12, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Shoulda mentioned this before, but if that's a hihglight on that front leg we see all of, can ya dull it? It's a bit bright compared to the other parts in light (then this'll be ready for cba) <span style="">20:30, 02/12/2015

actually that just a paler part of his legs, since he has pale markings 23:49, February 12, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

in that case, CBA? <span style="">23:56, 02/12/2015

approved <span style="">23:54, 02/14/2015

Hollyfrost (W) - redone
first charart here back in 2k13 — <span style="">Fri Feb 13 22:28

smudge the shading on the black. <span style="">22:36, 02/13/2015

reups — <span style="">Fri Feb 13 22:41

Kirk (Ki) - For Approval
— <span style="">Fri Feb 13 22:33

Approved. 12:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Tigerclaw (WC) (W) - For Approval
— <span style="">Fri Feb 13 22:33

Approved. 12:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Mockingjay (W) ~ CBA
a few bits don't match the kit, but I intend on tweaking that. 16:53, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit? 10:20, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think the tail shading is fine, but the rest do need defining, especially on the legs. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:18, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 16:22, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Love the colours on this <3 Smudge the patches in the direction of the fur a little more, also take into consideration of her pelt length too! — <span style="">Thu Feb 12 09:40

Reups Thanks! I'm going to have a swell time matching this to the apprentice when the blanks are done 15:21, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm CBA? <span style="">02:41, 02/15/2015

Approved. 14:39, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenfail ~ CBA
That is the perfect name for her. I can't even match my own pattern. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:29, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, and even expand in some areas (like the tail and chest). Also if you're going to smudge it (and this goes for the patches as well), make sure it flows with the direction the fur is going. — <span style="">Mon Feb 9 08:44

Re-ups Eh I'm probably gonna re do this later since it isn't co-operating and I'm not in the mood for chararts atm. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:59, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Much happier now. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:02, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I'm going to refer back to my previous comment, also where is your light source coming from? — <span style="">Wed Feb 11 08:04

Re-upped <== <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 09:47, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

If you're using a light source like that, perhaps try something like this? Also if she has ginger on her, add some stripes (refer to my comment on Cinnamonflame's warrior). — <span style="">Thu Feb 12 19:50

.... She's basically tortoiseshell, so I don't think she'd need stripes?? 00:32, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, but she still has ginger on her, so she'll need some stripes. Even if they are rather faint. On Alexnader's kit she has stripes on her ginger patches. — <span style="">Fri Feb 13 00:34

I'll add them, even though her design doesn't call for it. Also, could you upload to tinypic instead? I'm in China and the Internet is slow as hell... They block everything they can man. 00:41, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Here you go,. — <span style="">Fri Feb 13 00:45

Re-upped I've decided not to add the stripes, because I've seen many tortie's without them, and her design doesn't call for it, if that's okay. 08:55, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

hm this looks good I'm gonna CBA this <span style="">23:06, 02/14/2015

Approved. 14:40, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Tigerstar (W) - Redone
nice <span style="">22:53, 02/14/2015

24 hours. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Beautifulface (Star) - Approved
rad — <span style="">Sat Feb 14 22:53

hmmm CBA? <span style="">17:53, 02/15/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Nikos (w) ~ redone
23:03, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Loonface (W) ~ redone
my very first shorthair warrior is a redo of my very first RP main on here 22:19, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the white parts (other than the muzzle and tail tip), it makes the white look grey. Lovely! 18:19, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine - those parts are just about completely covered in shadow, so of course they'd look 'gray' 18:35, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

I agree w/ sorrel beebs <span style="">22:59, 02/14/2015

re-up 23:11, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Brightfern (mc) ~ Approved
okay so apparently she never got approved and silverW was okay w/ this soo here we go 23:19, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">17:57, 02/15/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Souldew (W) ~ redone
only reason why is bc his page is still around 19:58, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Hazelfern (Ki) - Approved.
pretty much the same as the warrior. — <span style="">Thu Feb 12 22:17

hmm... CBA? <span style="">22:58, 02/14/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Elmstar (W) - Approved
matching the kit was painful. 21:45, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the fur in his ears a tinnny bit? <span style="">02:36, 02/15/2015

Re-uploaded. 17:55, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

CBA then? honestly i see nothing else wrong w this <span style="">18:07, 02/15/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shepard (W) - Approved
she and Archangel are joining SC to be Gay Squad nerds but I have to wait until their thing is done so in the meantime, have a warrior.

CBA? <span style="">23:04, 02/14/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Patrick (Ki) - Approved
i love his pattern wayyyy too much <span style="">18:33, 02/9/2015

Blur and define the shading a tad? Overall it looks great and I love the pattern, but there needs to be a little more shading on the hind legs and near the side/belly area. O p a l. . . ♥ 04:00, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

reup <span style="">23:07, 02/12/2015

CBA? this is beautiful tbh 18:15, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Esteban (K)~ Approved
babby Esteboob, anyways first try at a smoke tabby, not sure if I did right. Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 22:32, February 16, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the eye depth. 22:44, February 16, 2014 (UTC)

What kind of smoke tabby is he? 01:14, February 20, 2014 (UTC)

Not to sure, really. http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131116015436/warriorcatclansrp/images/thumb/e/ef/Esteban.jpg/600px-Esteban.jpg, I really don't much about smoke cats D: Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 00:53, February 22, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Maybe make him look more silver and black? He looks somewhat brown at the moment, don't know if that's just my monitor. —<span style=";background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right bottom, from(#FF4040), to(#FFADAD));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(left, white, darkblue); linear-gradient(right, white, darkblue); border:3px ridge black; padding:0em; -moz-box-shadow: 2px 1px 5px black; -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 1px 5px black; border-radius:0 15px 0 15px; -moz-border-radius:0 15px 0 15px ; -webkit-border-radius:0 15px 0 15px;"> <span title="Swag" style="color:white; font-family:MV Boli;font-weight:bold; text-shadow: 3px 3px 3px black;Font-Size:140%">Fez   <span title="Swag" style="color:white; font-family:MV Boli; font-weight:bold; text-shadow: 3px 3px 3px black; font-size:110%">talk 10:31, February 22, 2014 (UTC)

He's a black smoke tabby, so he'd only have gray around his belly and stuff. Google more ref pictures, to get the idea of his coloration. 04:48, February 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 20:23, March 1, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Blur the shading along the bottom of the haunch, especially in the grey area. 00:17, March 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upsCha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 21:35, March 4, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define eye shading, I don't know if its just my browser, but the eyes don't look shaded. 00:06, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Is the light gray on his haunch smoke or a highlight? 01:56, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smoke Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 01:59, March 16, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Maybe smudge in the smoke a bit on the haunch. 16:28, May 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 23:48, May 9, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the tail shading, if there's any. 00:50, May 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 00:30, May 22, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the shading on the legs/feets. 14:11, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Cha Cha Real Smooth 〜(^∇^〜）（〜^∇^)〜 (talk) 21:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the depth a bit along the haunch. <span style="">21:58 Sat Sep 6

Re-ups

Still working? 23:39, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

yeah, I decided to redo his shading overall 00:24, February 9, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Hmm, it's looking really red right now - perhaps put the shading layer on multiply? 16:21, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups, yeah it's already on multiply so I just tone it down 03:08, February 10, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Still looks red... What color did you use for the shading? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:27, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Well it suppose to look red considering that I used red for the shading, like Leggy did on Sweettit's warrior charart. 22:49, February 10, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Darken the shade of red you're using and desaturate it a tiny bit more. Perhaps blur it into the darker areas a little more too, so that it isn't as intense on the smokey parts? 01:17, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 03:46, February 11, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

I'm sorry, but the shading still looks red. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:33, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Well it's suppose to be red, considering I used dark red. 05:48, February 11, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

But it's pretty much red to the point where he looks like he's bleeding. Perhaps play around with the colors? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:02, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:27, February 12, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

CBA? <span style="">18:09, 02/15/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenflame (Ki) ~ Approved
Well, my first one's up! ^.^ Added Fur texture and everything! 18:11, March 8, 2014 (UTC)

Bump 00:01, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Add shading. 01:56, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 02:05, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading. When you squint and look at the image, you should be able to see which areas of the body are in light and which are flat or back a little ways, being cast in shadow. 15:47, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups! 22:49, March 18, 2014 (UTC)

....

Possibly sharpen the shading a bit more, or lighten the body color? I don't see much of any parts being in the light or not, but that could just be me. 16:28, May 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups! 16:51, May 3, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten it up some more? I can barely tell the bdoy from the lineart. 00:51, May 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups! 00:59, May 12, 2014 (UTC)

Does he have a lighter underbelly or something? If not, then the shading's leaking away from under his haunch. Also sharpen/define your shading and lighten the base a little more. Make sure the nose is gray, too, for black cats can't have pink noses without at least some white on their body. 03:00, May 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups! 15:48, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the base color more, and does he have a stripe down his back, or is that a highlight? If it's a stripe, define it, but if it's a highlight, thicken it, blur it, etc. Highlights hug the body and shouldn't just be thin lines along the lineart. 02:32, May 21, 2014 (UTC)

Totally re-did the shading, Re-Ups! 23:28, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge/Blur the shading around some, it looks really blotchy. 20:24, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups!  Totally re-done again, his eyse look a bit red though... x3 21:17, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the shading a bit more and possibly define the eye depth a bit, then I'll CBA. <span style="">21:58 Sat Sep 6

Still working? <span style="">19:42 Sun Sep 28

Sorry, busy lately. x.x Reups! 15:30, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

...still working?? 01:40, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

I said reups. x3 01:48, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and maybe lighten the base a tiny bit. 01:49, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups! 01:59, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink? Looking good ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:48, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

I personally like the ear pink the way it is, it's already pretty well-defined. 01:40, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

lighten 'im up a bit, I can't see anything. He's p much pitch black, so I can't see shading, or any of the lines at all. (i know not all of the lines need to be seen but.) <span style="">03:09, 02/7/2015

Smudge the earpink a tad. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 04:42, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Totally Redone. 18:12, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the base a tiny bit so the shading can be seen <span style="">19:12, 02/9/2015

I think the shading just needs to be defined a bit, imo because if she lightens her base it's gonna look dark gray. Could be my screen though. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, she can afford to lighten the base a little bit and still have him look black. <span style="">00:29, 02/12/2015

Re-ups

CBA? <span style="">18:11, 02/15/2015

Approved. 17:04, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Bakura (Ki) - redone
heck ye — <span style="">Sun Feb 15 00:22

24 hours <span style="">20:37, 02/16/2015

Snakestorm (W) ~ Redone
idk they were bothering me. <span style="">19:21 Mon Feb 16

24 hours m8 <span style="">20:57, 02/18/2015

Shadowshade (W) ~ Redone
same as above. <span style="">19:21 Mon Feb 16

24 hours m8 <span style="">20:57, 02/18/2015

Tigerscar (W) ~ redone
01:54, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours m8 <span style="">20:57, 02/18/2015

Hollycloud (W) ~CBA
VS gave the ok 01:54, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

ehhh cba? <span style="">23:34, 02/18/2015

approved <span style="">00:33, 02/20/2015

Wrenstorm (W) ~ CBA
hey look at piece of trash, lmao &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Ospreypaw/signature&#125;&#125; (talk) 02:32, February 15, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

hmm define the earpink in the ear closest to us and define the depth on the front leg closest to us <span style="">02:34, 02/15/2015

Re-ups - <font-color="blue">TITAN  <font-color="blue"> HAS A PLAN FOR YOU!  02:42, February 15, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

is there any earpink at all? i see none <span style="">02:45 Mon Feb 16

re-ups - <font-color="blue">TITAN  <font-color="blue"> HAS A PLAN FOR YOU!  21:11, February 18, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

hmmmm CBA? <span style="">23:32, 02/18/2015

approved <span style="">00:33, 02/20/2015

Caesar (W) - CBA
hes a cutie. <span style="">02:43 Wed Feb 11

I think maybe you should define the shading a little more. I looks fine on the tail, but on the rest of the body it's a little lacking. (but otherwise this is my favorite charart on the whole site)     O p a l. . . ♥ 03:54, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. omg thank u so much ;-; <span style="">22:59 Wed Feb 11

Can you define it just a touch more everywhere except the tail? This is beautiful. 20:28, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. thank u .0. this is honestly the most i'm going to define it, as if it goes any darker it'll look bad and too dark to fit the fur. possibly see rookheart's warrior for why the shading's lighter? <span style="">17:11 Mon Feb 16

CBA? 21:01, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

approved <span style="">00:33, 02/20/2015

Rookheart (Wa) ~ CBA
eh i dont really like the shading. <span style="">16:46 Sun Sep 28

re-ups, i updated the white. <span style="">19:42 Sun Sep 28

define shading? <span style="">08:15, 10/26/2014

re-ups. <span style="">02:35 Sat Nov 1

A biiiit more? <span style="">20:43, 11/12/2014

re-ups. <span style="">00:59 Sat Jan 31

Darken the shading. 01:45, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">20:53 Sun Feb 1

Still can't see the shading friend ;;; <span style="">03:07, 02/7/2015

the white looks just a lil bit gray, hun :3 That   Raven-Obsessed   Person  01:13, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

still working? <span style="">18:13, 02/15/2015

re-ups. honestly i mean i like lighter shading does it honestly have to be as dark as the other ones? i like it when it's more blended with the fur rather than the boldness, i dont like bold, dark shading personally. maybe they're in lighter environments, and i see in real photographs of cats it usually isn't as dark as a lot of chararts on here? idk <span style="">16:58 Mon Feb 16

CBA? 21:02, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

approved <span style="">00:33, 02/20/2015