Warriorcatclansrp Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page/Archive 18

Sunclaw (W) - CBA
nice 01:34, 04/5/2015

his stripes look kinda purple? 18:08 Sun Apr 5

reup 18:09, 04/6/2015

Define Earpink. That seems to be the only problem in my computer screen. 12:47, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Its v pale but its there, and i have no issues seeing it. Rather not change it bc i colour picked from the image. This is the natural colour. 13:55, 04/7/2015

smudge the stripes more if you want, otherwise i'd say this looks good 11:47 Wed Apr 8

I like the haunch how it is but I'll smudge elsewhere if u want? 13:33, 04/8/2015

this is optional obviously, but maybe change the pupil? it makes the eyes look a little out of focus to me? Isa <3 00:57, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'd say define the earpink a bit. 21:25 Tue Apr 21

The earpink's their. its just pale ~Brambleshade

I can't tell it apart from the pelt. I'd say define it some. 11:29 Fri May 1

Still working? 15:15, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Giaria, I can't really distinguish the ear pink from the pelt. Maybe just make it a tad brighter/more saturated? H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  00:24, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit to bold. Maybe smudge/blur them a small bit? Flame star22  15:57, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup i hate this 16:49, 05/23/2015

Just a question (and because my eyes are horrible), but is there texture just on the paler parts, or the entire base+pale parts? I don't think it quite matters either way, but since I can't tell, I wanted to ask.

just the pale part on the chest bc it looked gross bc the smudging of the stripes make it look like the rest has texture 23:10, 05/25/2015

CBA? 12:05, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. 00:03 Fri May 29

Patchkit (Ki) ~ CBA
idk. 21:10 Sat Apr 11

Prod. 21:25 Tue Apr 21

Define the shading on the legs 09:28, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 15:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. 03:32 Sat May 23

CBA? 12:10, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Longhaired Apprentices ~ CBA
idk im feeling it today. <span style="">02:08 Sun May 3

the fur on the back of the head looks matted <span style="">14:57, 05/3/2015

hopefully this looks better. <span style="">02:29 Wed May 6

Could you floof out the haunch and shoulders more, and make the fur a little shaggier on the backs of the top halves of the legs? Think like big pantaloons. 00:35, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">03:41 Sat May 23

CBA? 12:13, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Amethystcloud (W) ~ CBA
no no no guys, this cat exists, and was apart of the clans. she is an aesthetic. <span style="">01:12 Wed May 6

define the shading just a tiny bit? i know you like light shading tho <span style="">01:53 Wed May 6

It looks fine as it is 09:21, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Nah it needs to be defined. 00:28, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 09:51, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">03:42 Sat May 23

CBA? 12:14, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Marius (Ki) - CBA
smol bab <span style="">20:09, 05/11/2015

it been 6 days can i have a comment pls <span style="">19:59, 05/17/2015

I honestly see nothing wrong with this charart, but maybe add a little highlight to the hind leg? The shading looks a tad flat, but if you make it any darker the colors may fuse with the base, but if you're one of those people who are strictly against highlights than just ignore this comment. H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  20:05, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

yeah i dont use highlights bc it makes them look shiny <span style="">23:10, 05/20/2015

That's the sole reason why I use highlights XD But okay then, I just wanted to comment since you asked for on. Sorry I couldn't be more helpful. H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  23:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:15, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Fishwhisker (K) ~ CBA
she smol <span style="">19:53 Sat May 16

Define shading. Beaut 15:26, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">19:01 Wed May 20

CBA? 09:52, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

sorry to interrupt but the shading is leaking from the front of the haunch <span style="">23:13, 05/25/2015

I believe the shading can be fixed after approval. Continuing CBA. 12:16, May 27, 2015 (UTC) reups <span style="">18:45 Wed May 27

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Pietro (K) ~ CBA
small son 05:53, May 21, 2015 (UTC)'

wheres yer light source? body ways --> face says <---. pls define light source on the small child a H HHHHH   <span style="">14:59, 05/21/2015

blur the shading more? -muffled screams-  <span style="">16:19 Thu May 21

reups hows this lookin? 06:28, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading up from the rump area a little more, following the back. 22:56, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

reups i tried 06:56, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:17, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Smokestorm (W) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 02:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ooo, so pretty. I think u should define the shading a little 06:58, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Updated     H y a l i t e      ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 13:14, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the facial shading just a tiny bit? I'm having a rough time making out exactly where it is on this. Daaang, your images are amazing, please share your secrets.

Updated ^^  And thanks! I'm actually in the process of making a tutorial right now, but I just think it will end in everyone knowing how lazy I am XD    H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  14:24, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:18, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Maplepaw (SplC) (K) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 02:41, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils to the eyes and make them more of a copper colour? 12:24, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Updated     H y a l i t e      ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 13:15, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Teach me your ways of shading, oh master (im not joking) The nose is completely white, shouldn't it be..like pink?

It should be a light mulberry colour, I think. (or just colourpick from the life image) 11:25, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Updated     H y a l i t e      ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 15:45, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

define the earpink a tiny bit? <span style="">19:52 Sat May 23

Updated    H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  20:34, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:18, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Stormwing (K) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  03:23, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:19, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Featherbush (Q) ~ CBA
Poor her 08:31, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the base of the tail. Overall, the charart looks great though ^^     H y a l i t e      ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 13:31, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 14:31, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken or define the belly shading a little more, and shade the face to match with the light source on the rest of the body. Our right side would be primarily in shadow, save for the bone above the "brow", and depending on how flat or angular her face is, the whole or half of the bridge of the muzzle would be shaded. 22:55, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:25, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Unless the changes aren't showing, you still need to cover the entire right side (our right) in shadow. 16:29, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:20, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:19, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Dragonfire (W) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 23:19, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading on the legs 03:30, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Updated. H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 03:44, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's supposed to be black-and-white, right? This is one of my favorite pelt styles, and it's only a suggestion, but perhaps you could darken the base pelt a couple shades? He looks more gray-and-white on my screen. From experience, I find that using a shade around (or darker than) #0F0F0F works wonderfully- it's dark, and you can still see everything you want to see. Given that there's texture, that also helps to slightly darken the image.

I tested it out, and if I went through with that I'd basically have to lower the shading layer to around 10% opacity (so it doesn't blend with the lines) which decreases the depth in the image a lot (and adding highlights to give it more contrast just gets us right back where we started XD), so I'm just going to leave it as is. H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 14:18, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

maybe just lighten the shading on the back a little bit? it makes him look like he has a dark stripe on his back. (imo the base is fine but whatever) <span style="">14:32 Mon May 25

Updated. H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  14:39, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:20, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Sycamorestream (W) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 16:21, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the texture a bit. :)  Find beauty  even in the ugliest days.  18:19, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Updated    H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 18:20, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It's hard to see against the pelt color. <span style="">19:39 Sat May 23

Updated    H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  20:33, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:20, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Agatekit (K) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 22:49, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:21, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Whitefang (W) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 23:06, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:21, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Swiftthorn (W) ~ CBA
H y a l i t e    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ 01:26, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, he's already done? Thank you!! It'd be cool if you blurred the texture a bit. YOUNG BLOOD  05:14, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Updated    H y a l i t e     ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥  05:17, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:22, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29

Minktail (W) ~ CBA
ye <span style="">23:04 Tue May 26

CBA? 12:22, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:03 Fri May 29