Warriorcatclansrp Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page/Archive 13

Herbpetal (Star) ~ CBA
Hey, look, it's my first (adopted) character! I tried to match her medicine cat - it's been a long time since I've used that smudging type! Anyways, comments? Bb un   legs  02:12, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink that much, even for a black cat. Is it the shading? 03:15, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, it's the shading. Bb un   legs  03:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Light source? 16:43, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

It's the same as Cloudstorm's and Fallowheart's light source. Bb un   legs  16:44, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Doesn't look like it's coming from any one direction....particularly the tail. Where are you intending it to be coming from? 19:37, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Upper right hand corner. Bb un   legs  19:45, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Then there'd be no shading on the top of the tail, none along the back, and none on the top of her head. There wouldn't be shading on the front of her haunch, and nothing on her shoulder. Fix that, if you could? 20:08, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

But her source is the same as Fallowheart's and Cloudstorm's. Do you know what I could do to make her get the same light source as they? Bb un   legs  20:12, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

If you still have Fallowheart's layers, just copy/paste the shading onto this. xD 20:19, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  20:34, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 22:10, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. 19:46, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Patchpaw (Spl) (K) ~ Redone
I redid Patchpaw's kit because I wanted to do it on GIMP. OA is me, and I'll redo the apprentice shortly. Comments? 00:21, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

I think this is great! Maybe pinken theearpink? If not, that's ok. Everything else is great!

The earpink is fine. Black cat's don't have neon pink earpink, nor do they have flaming red ones. They have a normal, gray-pinkish earpink. Define the shading and the eye depth? I can barely see it. 22:02, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reups! 02:35, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours. 20:30, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Dawnpetal (E) ~ Approved
Mmmhm. Moss potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit 23:38, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Make the earpink less pink? It look too bright for this kind of base coat. Bb un   legs  23:45, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Earpink's fine. Perhaps tint the shading to a dark cream, brown, or red color, rather then black? It's a bit harsh on such a fair coat. 03:28, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

In her description (section), it says her pelt is/was graying. Try to make that look like it a bit? Bb un   legs  19:12, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

I tinted the shading brown. I dulled the pelt a bit instead of making the grey hairs, because it was a pain. '''Reuploaded.   Moss  potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit''' 19:47, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur i just a tad? 01:31, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

The shading? Just making sure xP  Moss  potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit 14:24, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The shading. 19:30, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I think only the shading on the haunch needs to be blurred..everything else looks fine to me. 20:23, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

frick. I just reuped right when leggu commented D: Well, I blurred it anyway. Reups. Moss potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit 20:26, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Ah, okay. xD It looks fine. CBA? 20:31, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Wait, isn't her underbelly and tailtip supposed to be white? Bb un   legs  20:33, June 8, 2013 (UTC)\

They are white. The shading makes it seem darker. Moss potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit 20:39, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

It just looks darker due to shading placement. Continuing CBA. 21:53, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's great!

Rainpaw (Star) ~ CBA
Rainkit<3333 Now, I kinda do believe that kits should have StarClan chararts, although if I am proven false, then I'll take it down, or change it so that hes older in StarClan. Anyways, comments? 04:55, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

No, kits don't get StarClan chararts. Only apprentices (?) and up. Moss potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit 11:27, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Well, then I changed his story up a bit, and made him die as an apprentice instead. So, he's apprentice-warrior aged. 16:06, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bir? This is pretty, Stoem. 21:51, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Woah, this is beautiful. o.o Could you remove the colored space between the legs? 20:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a bit as well? It's making the white look a bit gray. Bb un   legs  20:21, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think the shading needs to be lightened. As long as the edges are sharpened, then it's gonna be okay. 22:11, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups! Thanks guys 8D 02:30, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

CBAAAA? 16:58, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. 16:24, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Harestep (Star) ~ CBA
Comments? Osprey (talk) 00:48, June 4, 2013 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Smudge the earpink, white, and blur the shading. Bb un   legs  01:35, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Beebs. 18:42, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups.Osprey (talk) 21:10, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Add eye depth and the pupil. 01:31, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-upsOsprey (talk) 22:18, June 5, 2013 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Osprey, this is misnamed. It needs to be named Harestep.star.png, not Harestep.png or Harestep.2.png; when re-uploading after renaming this, when it tells you there's already a file here, just click "Overwrite" or whatever /shot Anyways, there's waste on some of the charart, most notably on the underneath of the tail and behind the back legs; also, some near our closest front paw. Blur the earpink a pinch, and define the eye depth. Pretty~ 23:13, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Ups Osprey (talk) 01:09, June 7, 2013 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Snydef tge stipes a ad?  01:31, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-upsOsprey (talk) 22:47, June 7, 2013 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Can you blur the shading just to the left of his fully visible foreleg? I quite like this. ouo 20:21, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Osprey (talk) 21:09, June 8, 2013 (UTC)Ospreypaw

CBA? 21:48, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, sorry to interrupt, but the tail shading looks flat. Define it, maybe? Bb un   legs  21:50, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Naw, doesn't look flat to me. The depth looks fine. It's as equally prominent as the rest of the image. 21:52, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 16:20, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt again, but the tail tip looks red. Even with the shading tint, it shouldn't be that red. Bb un   legs  16:23, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

It should be that red, and it looks fine to me. 16:54, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-re-CBA? 19:27, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. 02:38, June 14, 2013 (UTC)