Warriorcatclansrp Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page/Archive 17

Ebonypaw (K) - Approved
eh 02:31, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit? 16:11, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the darkness is okay, but could you define it a little more on her face? 18:35, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 03:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 16:57, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 23:46, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Newtcloud (W) ~ Approved
noot noot 19:33, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 16:58 Sat Mar 28

Approved. 23:46, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

pheasanttail (w) - redone
last one for tonight — Sat Mar 28 09:22

24 hours. 23:46, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Gingerpaw (A) ~ Redone-ion rings
what an asshole 21:25, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:46, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Cross-scar (W) - Redone
lmao 22:39, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:46, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Ysoltstar (L) - CBA
for Silverw 17:19, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define and lighten up the shading 17:25 Sat Mar 28

Re-uploaded. 17:51, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 22:07, 03/31/2015

Approved. 19:26, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Medium-haired Deputy Blanks - CBA
two in one morning yas — Sat Mar 28 21:27

CBA? 22:03, 03/31/2015

Approved. 19:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Hawkwing (W) ~ CBA
GOD he's old 23:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 21:25, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

how is he so gorg ;3; Ravie <3 02:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 13:06, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Pheasanttail (D) - CBA
my poor son — Fri Apr 3 23:38

CBA? "he's hot hot hot" -tawnystorm 01:20, 04/5/2015

Approved. 13:07, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Goldenlight (W) ~ CBA
Err, I tried. It looks bad. I can't shade it for some reason, but I used Pixlr. Flame star22  20:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils to the eyes. There's also an empty pixel on our left front leg. To shade on pixlr, make a new layer, then draw in the shading where it needs to be. Use other images for a reference. Then go to Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur and set it to a good rate. Remove the waste (or set the layer mode to multiply) and you should be good. If he's ginger then he should also have stripes. I suggest using GIMP, as it's a lot better than pixlr. 20:55 Fri Apr 3

GIMP requires download, and I can't download things to my computer. I also don't know how to add pupils, and I've tried doing shading, but it won't work for some reason. Thanks for the advice though. Flame star22  20:59, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I've been asked to take over, and I'll get it up soon :P 21:02, 04/3/2015

reups 19:14, 04/6/2015

CBA? 19:19, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 20:00, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shadepaw (A) - CBA
All colours, opacity percentages etc taken from kit. 14:44, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

theres a little waste between his front paws — Mon Mar 9 00:15

Re-uploaded. 22:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 23:22 Mon Apr 6

Approved. 20:02, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Elmstar - (D) - CBA
shading is hell 17:57, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a tad. 18:35, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 23:26 Mon Apr 6

Approved. 20:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Aftertide (W) ~ CBA
Ew. x.x --Nachtide

define the shading on the legs, and sign your post with four tildes ( ~ ) next time instead of putting your name manually. <span style="">21:05 Thu Apr 2

Which legs? I personally think the front ones are defined already, if you're referring to those o3o And it wouldn't let me. --Nachtide (talk) 21:26, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

ah alright. i think the shading on the front legs could be defined, but it doesn't need to be defined too much. <span style="">21:31 Thu Apr 2

What's the light source on this? If it's the standard, the face shading needs defined. <font color="#E87BFF" title="userpage" face="Boogiewoogiehmk" size="4">Ravie <font color="#E87BFF" title="talk" face="boogiewoogiehmk" size="4" style=><3 02:54, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If somebody could help me fix this up, I'd appreciate it ^^;; I don't know light sources and whatnot that well. --Nachtide (talk) 19:11, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

just define shading on the face (should be on our left side of the face) and put the shading on the underside of the tail and this will be good <span style="">18:13, 04/6/2015

Re-uploaded. I tried xD -- Nac ht  ide  22:43, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">14:01, 04/7/2015

Approved. 11:01, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Giratinashadow (W) - CBA
??? (I can remove the wings if need be) — <span style="">Thu Apr 2 21:16

CBA? 23:57, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 11:01, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Darkkit (k) - CBA
he's description was a pain in the butt to follow — <span style="">Sat Mar 28 08:52

Would his tabby marks show? 17:19, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

His tabby markings are there, if that's what you mean. — <span style="">Tue Apr 7 09:38

Define them then? <span style="">14:04, 04/7/2015

I think they're fine the way they are tbh. Like the layer is his base pelt set on multiply @ 100%, so idk — <span style="">Wed Apr 8 08:39

Looks fine to me! CBA? 15:52, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 12:31, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Vix (A) ~ CBA
meh 20:33, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

lighten the body shading a touch and blur it 00:26, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 13:36, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

define and lighten the shading everywhere. i suggest tinting it a li'l bit but you don't have to <span style="">18:59 Wed Mar 11

Reups 13:38, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

This is lovely, but could you explain where your light source is? 14:17, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks :3 It's coming at her face. Should I define the shading a tad or fix the lighting? 10:32, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

If it's coming from the face, swap the shading on the tail around. 13:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:11, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:42, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 13:18, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderstorm (DF) (app) - CBA
the difference between this and her warrior charart tho — <span style="">Sun Mar 29 01:45

CBA? 12:35, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 13:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Quail (K) - CBA
I was asked to do this by the owner so here I am, onto Swampgator and then Jadefur. <span style="">02:28 Sat Mar 21

It's beautiful! Define the shading a little everywhere but the leg/thigh/haunch thing. :P wow   i'm   cool  16:16, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:14, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">23:25 Mon Apr 6

CBA? 15:48, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. <span style="">20:18 Sat Apr 11

Daisykit (K) - CBA
my precious child — <span style="">Fri Mar 27 07:41

redone i like this better — <span style="">Thu Apr 9 06:20

CBA? 15:48, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. <span style="">20:18 Sat Apr 11

Oakstar (L) - CBA
i just picked a random dead leader of mine just to try these out. <span style="">15:42 Sat Mar 28

Define the tail shading a bit. 15:46, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define all shading 00:29, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">21:03 Tue Mar 31

CBA? 15:47, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. <span style="">20:18 Sat Apr 11

Starblast (W) - CBA
My little player *sniffle* Comments? :3  Rainy is da...    BANANA QUEEN!   23:30, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

smudge the stripes more <span style="">23:33, 03/31/2015

define the shading everywhere? <span style="">23:51 Tue Mar 31

Re-ups. I'll probably go through and smudge the stripes along his tail more because it's not showing too well. Comments? Rainy is da...   BANANA QUEEN!   23:59, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

smudge most of his stripes a li'l more, they look more blurred than smudged. the tail stripes are fine tho <span style="">00:00 Wed Apr 1

Re-ups. Rainy is da...   BANANA QUEEN!   00:08, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

love the pattern, are you using gaussian blur for the shading? i recommend avoiding that so the shading wouldn't seem so overblurred or blotchy in some places 01:17, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups. I don't know if it's any better, I tried redoing the shading to where it would look better and it just looks darker to me with slight variations here and there *sigh* I tried to redo the shading so it didn't appear blotchy but... idk  Rainy is da...    BANANA QUEEN!   03:04, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the tail, and lighten up the shading just a li'l bit <span style="">11:35 Thu Apr 2

Re-ups. If I don't kill the shading, I'll be shocked, tbh. Rainy is da...   BANANA QUEEN!   03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on our right front leg and then it looks good. shading is a pain <span style="">20:57 Fri Apr 3

Re-ups. Rainy is da...   BANANA QUEEN!   04:29, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 15:46, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:18 Sat Apr 11

Swiftstorm (W) - CBA
yea. <span style="">21:19 Sat Apr 4

define the shading a touch on the tail and legs 17:46, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">01:21 Wed Apr 8

CBA? 15:44, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:18 Sat Apr 11

Mossstar (L) - CBA
rip. 10:46, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

approved. <span style="">20:18 Sat Apr 11

Umbrastripe (app) ~ CBA
hi 04:07, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

cba? too hot [hot damn] 23:02, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

mitchell (kp) - CBA
— <span style="">Sat Mar 28 08:52

CBA? 22:58, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Wolfkit (Ki) - CBA
<span style="">20:14, 04/6/2015

CBA? 10:25, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Roseleaf (MC) ~ CBA
idk. <span style="">03:07 Sun Apr 12

CBA? 11:31, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Smokethorn (W) - CBA
since his bae got one he gets one too 04:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 11:49, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

This is optional, but even though black cats get blue shading, this looks REAllY blue to me... maybe it should be a bit more black? <span title="♥"> ♥     I believe     in magic,     and love at first sight,   <span title="me?"> and fairytales. ♥   01:02, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Nah if it were more black you wouldn't be able to see it on the black base. 02:09, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Gullbreeze (W) - CBA
yoo 02:09, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? i am in love with this leggy how do u do it <span style="">23:22, 04/13/2015

i open gimp, delete the white in the blank, begin to lay down my base colors and ginger patches, burst into tears, sob for twenty minutes, summon the neighborhood crossroads demon, sell my soul for the fiftieth time, (really just give them an iou), have them complete it for me, promise to never make anymore, delete the waste around the image, save it, and done! as easy as 1 2 3 00:34, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

approved. also my friend, you have issues. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Coldpelt (W) ~ Redone
shame he was such a sue <span style="">23:09 Sat Apr 11

1. there's a loooot of waste around his whole body

2. the shading needs blurred/smudged bc it's flat

3. also, i'd lighten that shading

otherwise, it looks great! <font color="#6f0f5c" title="userpage" face="Boogiewoogiehmk" size="4">Isa <font color="#6f0f5c" title="talk" face="boogiewoogiehmk" size="4" style=""><3 23:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

the waste is supposed to be there <span style="">23:24 Sat Apr 11

reups also you dont have to blur/smudge your shading if it's flat you just have to define the depth of it <span style="">23:30 Sat Apr 11

could you blur/smudge it a little more though? 23:35, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">15:57 Sun Apr 12

up by the shoulder, the shading is a very thin line- it's a little unrealistic? maybe blur that somehow, or make the line less.. idk the term, defined? <span title="♥"> ♥     I believe     in magic,     and love at first sight,   <span title="me?"> and fairytales. ♥   01:06, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

redone <span style="">11:42 Wed Apr 15

24 hours. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Cliff (Ki) - Redone
again — <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

24 hours. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Cliff (A) - Redone
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

24 hours. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Alexander (Ki) - Redone
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

24 hours. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Cinderleaf (Mc) - Redone
such a pain in the ass tbh — <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

24 hours. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Rookheart (W) ~ Redone
yeah. <span style="">19:27 Wed Apr 15

24 hours. <span style="">20:55 Thu Apr 16

Elmstar (L) - CBA
u tried fez u tried (and yes I will define the shading lmao) 10:53, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the scars a tiny bit? beautiful <span style="">15:33 Sat Mar 28

I think they're fine tbh. As he ages, they would likely heal or fade more, given that they haven't been overly livid or prominent in the other chararts. 17:52, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

old scars tend to be white-pink in color; fresher stuff is the shade you have now 00:30, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not really here to say what should or shouldn't be done cause I dunno your standards on realism with things like scars. But a cat this color would have a skin color similar to this, since fur color does affect skin color. Scars, depending on the age of them and the individual (some people scar lighter, some scar darker, I assume it's the same for cats), the color would be a little off from that. Which would likely be a good bit lighter than these scars, since dark skin has a tendency to scar lighter, it'd probably be a little closer to gray. Just thought I'd give some input on that cuz i'm a nerd

Re-uploaded. 13:52, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 16:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 14:56, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Chervilclaw (W) - Tweaked
played around with the shading — <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

the shading's really really dark, maybe lighten it up a bit? ♥ I believe    in ghosts,     in magic,     love at first sight,   <span title="me?"> and fairytales. ♥   00:10, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's really the same as before; just smudged better. — <span style="">Sat Apr 18 00:13

24 hours yo. <span style="">21:29 Tue Apr 21

Daisyclaw (W) ~ CBA
the babe gives me so many feels - <font-color="blue">TITAN  <font-color="blue"> HAS A PLAN FOR YOU!  23:20, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Blend in the two separate shading placements. Feb 26, 2015, 22:40 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font-color="blue">TITAN  <font-color="blue"> HAS A PLAN FOR YOU!  23:20, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

define the light on the leg closest to us <span style="">15:30 Sun Mar 8

Re-ups  Swiggty Swonger, I summon thee donger . * ･ ｡ﾟ☆━੧༼ •́ ヮ •̀ ༽୨   02:18, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

The majority of the stripes look too solid. Smudge or blend them into the fur more? 14:06, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  Swiggty Swace, I summon thee Ace . * ･ ｡ﾟ☆━੧༼ •́ ヮ •̀ ༽୨   01:57, March 20, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Define the shading. 11:28, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  Swiggty Swace, I summon thee Ace . * ･ ｡ﾟ☆━੧༼ •́ ヮ •̀ ༽୨   20:52, March 20, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

smudge/blur the shading <span style="">18:56, 03/21/2015

Re-ups  Swiggty Swace, I summon thee Ace . * ･ ｡ﾟ☆━੧༼ •́ ヮ •̀ ༽୨   20:36, March 22, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Add a bit more depth and then this gets a CBA. 23:47, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:11, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll upload when I get the chance  Swiggty Swace    I summon thee Ace . * ･ ｡ﾟ☆━੧༼ •́ ヮ •̀ ༽୨   14:32, April 6, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

Re-ups  Swiggty Swace    I summon thee Ace . * ･ ｡ﾟ☆━੧༼ •́ ヮ •̀ ༽୨   21:47, April 10, 2015 (UTC)Ospreypaw

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:03, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Thunderbird (k) - CBA
nice — <span style="">Mon Mar 23 20:31

redone to match her new description — <span style="">Sat Apr 4 21:53

Lighten it just a tad? It's hard to differentiate the colouring from the lineart. 12:48, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

reups — <span style="">Sat Apr 11 03:02

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:03, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Crystalpaw (a) ~ CBA
what a nice kid 21:01, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or judge the shading more 13:04, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 20:46, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe add another layer of darker points to her face, so you build up the hues of the seal point in her life image? Just one or two more in increasingly darker and smaller layers. Optional though. 03:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 23:32, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where the nose go  add nosepink    <span style="">00:07 Sun Apr 5

re-up 18:41, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail. <span style="">23:27 Mon Apr 6

re-up 22:58, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:04, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Loachtail (ki) ~ CBA
small gay ready to play 20:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:04, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Loachtail (A) ~ CBA
cat lesbian 22:02, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading <span style="">14:09, 04/7/2015

re-up 23:29, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:05, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Ruddkit (K) - CBA
Could someone rename this Ruddkit (WC).kit.png? 19:05, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink and define shading everywhere. 12:46, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:05, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Adderkit (Ki) - CBA
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:06, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Caboose (Ki) - CBA
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Lars (Kp) - CBA
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

CBA? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

Approved. 12:06, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Beautifulface (MCA) - Redone
last one of the set — <span style="">Tue Apr 21 23:23

24 hours. 12:31, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Bouldertail (W) - Redone
nerd — <span style="">Tue Apr 21 23:23

24 hours. 12:32, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Peridotflight (W) ~ Redone
???? why does this nerd look so good???? <span style="">02:40 Wed Apr 15

beauty. maybe smudge those markings a bit more tho? 12:58, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">21:09 Thu Apr 16

Just a suggestion, but possibly smudge them a bit more? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

idk i think if i smudged them more you wouldn't be able to see them very well and i would be asked to define them <span style="">11:21 Thu Apr 23

24 hours. Approved. 11:15, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ivysnow (K) ~ CBA
this little cutie. <span style="">15:19 Thu Mar 26


 * poke* <span style="">23:28 Mon Apr 6

Define earpink? 14:56, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups. <span style="">01:50 Sat Apr 11

re-ups changed 'im up. <span style="">23:03 Thu Apr 16

Prod <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

CBA? 16:01, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:04 Sat Apr 25

Sapphire (W) ~ CBA
i'm getting rid of it <span style="">00:13 Sun Apr 5

blur the shading and the earpink 17:45, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">18:32 Sun Apr 5

blur the haunch shading <span style="">18:11, 04/6/2015

reups <span style="">11:56 Wed Apr 8

smooth out the shading just a bit more and I'll CBA 15:45, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">21:26 Sat Apr 11

Juuust smooth the shoulder shading a bit more to match the rest of the body. <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

reups <span style="">11:37 Thu Apr 23

Fabulous. CBA? 16:11, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:04 Sat Apr 25

James (Ki) - CBA
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

Lighten the shading a tad on the haunch? beauts. <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

reups thank c: — <span style="">Tue Apr 21 23:12

CBA? 16:13, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:04 Sat Apr 25

Oakheart (W) - CBA
— <span style="">Tue Apr 14 23:43

Lighten the shading on the white part of his stomach, and maybe define it on his tail a bit? <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

reups — <span style="">Tue Apr 21 23:20

CBA? 16:13, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:04 Sat Apr 25

Ivysnow (W) ~ CBA
yeah, i'll be redoing the kit i did up there pronto. <span style="">22:57 Thu Apr 16

re-ups i redid some of his markings. <span style="">01:39 Sun Apr 19

Prod. <span style="">21:25 Tue Apr 21

CBA? 16:16, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:04 Sat Apr 25

Hawkpaw (A) - CBA
yas — <span style="">Tue Apr 21 23:23

CBA? 16:16, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

approved. <span style="">00:04 Sat Apr 25

Sedgecloud (W) - CBA
— <span style="">Sat Apr 25 09:36

my precious child ;; CBA? 09:53, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 10:39, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Applewhisker (W) - CBA
— <span style="">Sat Apr 25 09:36

CBA? 09:54, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 10:39, April 26, 2015 (UTC)