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Mittens (Ro) ~ Declined
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Define earpink. Define nosepink. Brighten the eyes. Define shading on paws and tail.  "Wey hey  it's time to play" 12:04, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

RE-UPS! Not changing the eyes or earpink because I took them from her life image. Shading is fine i will not touch the shading kthxbai

Smudge the gray where it meets the white - it looks paintbrushy. Bb un   legs  16:59, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine...

It's not. It looks like you paintbrushed it on and didn't bother to smudge it, honestly .-. Bb un   legs  18:15, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

^^What Beebs said. Also, couldja define the depth in her eyes? 01:37, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

There's some white in the gray that's not supposed to be there. And, expand shading a tad? 01:40, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Theres gray waste, and I dont see any earpink really. and blur the gray and white like everyone else says. ♥ Stoem  star  ❄  Cheetahspirit is my life :3 00:07, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Where's the shading coming from? Just asking... it really needs to be blurred... She looks flat. 02:33, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

This is optional, but maybe smudge the part where the gray meets the white, to make her look fuzzy? :o  Moss  potato!     Love,      Passion,    and Spirit 19:27, April 14, 2013 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 00:35, April 18, 2013 (UTC)